Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Road trip

Here’s a fiction tidbit for Three Word Wednesday. (I made it a one-sentence Wednesday.) The words are shatter, enemy, vague.




He set the empty drink glass down in the slippery ring and scooped his wet keys from the bar, tripping a little on the lounge's patterned carpet, shattering any vague sense that he wasn’t his own worst enemy.

5 comments:

ThomG said...

How many words was this? Very nice. Love the opening.

lissa said...

interesting take, a bit of flash fiction with mystery behind it, I like this idea of one sentence story

Tumblewords: said...

Good writing!

~ kjb said...

That's what I call a sentence.

Jon said...

Madam,

As one who has occasionally tripped over the carpet pattern, I applaud you.